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To Gape
Now that you're gone it's just as I feared.
There is that hole I knew you filled.
It's gaping again.
Open and pooling.
The emotions that come from the hole.
The just stagnate.
They rest.
Seemingly blocked.
But you know how it is,
Things never are how they seem.
Theres always something in the way.
Something blocking the hole from being what it really should.
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Literature
What you give
Is this new?
The feelings that surrond the question.
They have an acidic coating.
One that erodes.
Decays the true feeling.
The one that matters.
It's awkward in so many ways.
This is love.
There is no question.
Understanding what thoughts mean.
No longer guessing.
Pretending no longer.
Where does the pain come from?
Is there truth from the fraud?
Or is there another?
This rambling will cease.
There is no question.
Swing for one more.
One more what?
Arms and legs tangled.
Wishing to be close.
Oh So Close
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Literature
Four letters
It means so much,
These four letters
It means scratches, bumps, scars.
It means cool breezes.
The colors of fire all around.
Falling from the sky.
Descending from the heavens.
It's hard to fully comprehend four letters.
They never really come together like they should.
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Literature
Moving on
Since when is moving on so easy?
No tears wasted?
This is new
Normally it's weeks
Could be months
But a three minute car ride?
A new record on so many levels
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Literature
Phone
This small amount of plastic, wiring, and metal.
Only amounts to a device used to torment and degrade.
Degrade the mind as well as the heart.
But yet as it degrades it can also heal.
Heal the distance between him and her.
Why as he holds this mess of plastic in his hand,
Does it have to be her on the other side?
Can it not just be someone else?
Someone who could just,
Heal the degeneration that this mess has done?
The stupid plastic pieces that have cut to the bone.
The wires being bitten apart in order to destroy the source of torment.
The metal screws flying through the madness.
And in the end.
The battered mess still ringing out the degenerating dial tone.
That noise that he's heard for the past six weeks.
Will it never stop?
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Literature
Dude....
Peace...
Finally in this place I can see it all.
Feel it all.
Understand the real meaning of the word breathe.
Feel clean air rushing into my lungs.
The trees that keep you centered.
Understanding that the new leaves have been turned.
Just this once...
I understand.
Without the soiled air of the towns we live in.
Just feeling the cleansing gusts of freshness.
Getting lost in my self for only god knows how long.
This type of freedom is lost in a hometown.
Nothing can touch me up here.
This is land untamed by the Industrial Devistation of America.
Nothing happens here but I still can not get past that fact that,
This is peace....
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Literature
6 Months Pending...
How can he feel so safe when he's lost in you?
In your words of comfort and freedom.
Promises so open and true.
Fearless are your eyes when faced with a challenge.
Dull do his glow when faced with defeat.
Your tears move the stars whenever you cry
The moon could be yours if you ever tried
Where did the time go when we were young?
So careless and free, always having fun.
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Literature
This Curse
Sleep, Why?
Eat, What?
Work, When?
Love, How?
How do you love someone when all you've ever known of it was false?
False Hope, False happiness, false love.
Why must we live in desperation of love?
Is it something that pulls us in and keeps us there?
Or is it something that you choose to have happen?
Looking into photos, do you see the shell that you used to be?
Do you hate the memories from the pictures that you have?
The ripped, torn, bitten apart pictures that you just can't delete from your computer?
Yes, you know what this poems about.
It's the poem about your inability to see the ugly truth.
That
You
Are
Destined
To
Fail

Plain and simple.
Failure is inexcusable, indisputable and inevitable.
Do you look in the mirror and see that hollow shell you live in?
Can you taste the disgusting filth that you so blindly enjoyed for all those months?
How much more do your eyes need to be pried open to see?
To see the curse placed upon them.
Ca
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Literature
The Question
Is this the reason why?
Answer this I think you'll cry
Can you feel the tension in the air?
Static pleasures flying everywhere
Late nights riding home alone
In the darkness flying farther
Don't you love the way she floats
Sliding straight down your throat
Ride the airwaves to disaster
Sleep the days away to safety
Dodge the bullet for the last time
Luck runs out all too quickly
Call out an SOS
Maybe someone'll be there on the other side
Living life to the limit
Seeing love from other people
Fleeing the questions
The answers that will make you cry
Feeling love from loveless bodies
Tasting life, sleeping through death
Choking from that tension in the air
Breath slowing, claming, dying
Eyes rolling not able to see that love
The loving bodies of disgrace
Fearing only that empty feeling
That empty feeling of loneliness
Can you ever see the need, the need for someone to be there?
Does it pain you like it pains me?
The hurting I feel from envisioning
The person that I wish could know my quest
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Literature
Just Go
everythings alive like the fire in her eyes.
nothings coming anywhere just going with a flow,
until the break of dawn in the darkness of the night
fly into the sky holding on until the fire in her eyes
dies
all of it dead
falling to the earth
burning up
never landing
always falling
can you stop it?
the fire catching,
the askes falling
hitting the ground
before the hit in a pile of ash.
no more no less
just ash as the fire shines in the sky.
no more living just eternal flame.
good night they say closing their eyes and the fires out.
the smoke envelopes them and makes them choke
death coming close
dieing togther burning alive.
goodnight.
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My Ocean by Detic My Ocean :icondetic:Detic 0 5
Literature
Untitled
         Every day he cried. Every time he thought of her another piece of his shattered heart broke off. Some people said he stalked her but no one every really knew. No one ever tried to get to know him. They all just got out of his way when they saw him coming. Not knowing if he'd lash out at them. But when he passed her he stopped and he'd take off the hood to show his strong jaw, cracked glasses and his scarred face. That scar from when his dad got angry one night and cut him. That scar that ran from his right eyebrow to his left jaw. That scar that everyone stared at and made stories about. While she would always walk by with a tear running down her makeupless face. She never would meet eyes with him and it has been months since anyone has heard him speak. While he made his way to gym he thought of her. As he pulled off his shirt everyone there could see the scares from his fathers rage on his defined back and shoulders. He couldn't wa
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Literature
My Second Poem
In his dark little world
He saw a light
She shined so bright
He felt he needed her
He thought she was his
And he was hers
Their hands always different as they held eachother
His wanting for her blinded him
She said back off,
His ears were closed
His friends didn't understadn why he was trying to change for her
So all along he heard her
He just wanted to the light to stay
But she left him and now he's in the dark..
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Long Live the Sorrow
You watch as the ink touches paper
These troubled eyes call for a desolate ending
Relieving the burden of your own little hell
A taste of things to come...
Your thoughts make for a good laugh
You won't live to regret your choice set in stone
You've staged a smile for a lifetime too long
There's so much they will never know
...Time to put the act to rest.
Staring through clouded eyes at the only thing between the peace you never had and your everlasting anguish
The once feared enemy, has now become your only hope to escape this wretched tale
Entering the unknown, leaving behind the life you never had.
Just the ink conformed to the paper, spelling out your final words...
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Days seem so long
When I sit here alone
fading in and out of thought
that is but the memory of yesterday
realising that theres no point in living
As I'm living a lie
but what is a lie for truth is a shadow
As i sit trying not to cry
those memories continue to torture me
And what i see before my eyes slowly...
...fades away...
I'm dreaming now
But such a horrid dream is this!
why? why?
...eruption of thought
How can this be truth
When the lies are so much better
Confused at the sights
Confused at the noise
My life is not in control
I am not myself anymore
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Trying to free me....
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...chains...
...shackles....
tieing me down
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all to cage my inner being
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i struggle......but....
nothing, trapped inside this cage, locked
so tightly, my movement
breaks my bones
Lies, tell me they're all lies!
This isn't the truth, I won't believe you!
This has got to be better than reality!
Stuck in this realm full of
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Detic
Adams
Artist | Literature
United States
Current Residence: Fairfield Conn.
Favourite genre of music: ANYTHING!
Favourite photographer: JLIFIII
Operating System: Windows
MP3 player of choice: Shit for brains
Favourite cartoon character: THUMPER!!!! from bambi
Interests
  • Listening to: Stay With Me(Unlikely) ~Celldweller
  • Reading: The thoughts of my mind
  • Watching: Those thoughts flow to a computer
I write this in a new mood of sorts. I realize now that life is ever changing no matter how stationary I want it to be. I also realize that my friends are quite possibly the best thing in my life, and therefore should never be overlooked. And as much as a new year coming is sort of big it's just another year in the span of everyones eventual short lives. I've never really recollected on a year like I feel I am about to, but we will try it and see how long this lasts.

First off, my writing failed this year, even if most of the writing I've ever done was this year. I feel as if I didn't put any effort into it. Just whenever I had a break during school I'd jot down some crappy lines. The lack of a muse also had quite an affect on this outcome, but hey, there is no point in looking for one, it should find you right?

Secondly, I really need to pay attention to my schoolwork Failing Color Theory will not have good repercussions. I'm going to have to take it again and it's still not going to be fun. As well as the D+ and the two C's are not going to be pretty. Although of course my A- in algebra will shine on for eternity. I really wish I knew why I'm not majoring in something that has to do with math, rather than fail at trying to major in something that has to do with graphic design. I really need to sort this shit out. This is the rest of my life isn't it? IDK

I also realize now, in this new year, that I really need to take better care of my money supply. Because it isn't always there. Especially if you own a car.

So here's to you 2008 and may you bring better money, time, and friendship management.


GL HF all

~Adams

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coldwintersxo Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2007
You wake up in a red room with no windows and doors, DON'T panic.. you're just in my heart!!! Send this to all the friends you want to keep forever...

Today is Bestfriend Day. Send this to all of your friends, and me if I am one. If you get 7 back you are LOVED!!! Here are the numbers of what kind of friend you are based on how many you get back..

1-3 ~ you're a bad friend
4-6 ~ you're an okay friend
7-9 ~ you're a good friend
10+ ~ you're great friend
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JLIFIII Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
lol i beet you im on Gueom`s wii btw he told me how to spell it lol
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Detic Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2007   Writer
Needs more Llama
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Hey thanks for the fav on [link]
~L~
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Zoklar Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2006
im watching you.
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If you've been poked it shows that you are either a very good friend or a very good artist. If you have been poked then you must poke at least five people on DA that you view as a great friend or a great artist as well as the one who poked you. Happy Poking!

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your a good artist!! keep up your work I love it all!!
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