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To Gape by Detic, literature

What you give by Detic, literature

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What you give

Is this new? The feelings that surrond the question. They have an acidic coating. One that erodes. Decays the true feeling. The one that matters. It's awkward in so many ways. This is love. There is no question. Understanding what thoughts mean. No longer guessing. Pretending no longer. Where does the pain come from? Is there truth from the fraud? Or is there another? This rambling will cease. There is no question. Swing for one more. One more what? Arms and legs tangled. Wishing to be close. Oh So Close

Four letters by Detic, literature

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Phone by Detic, literature

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Phone

This small amount of plastic, wiring, and metal. Only amounts to a device used to torment and degrade. Degrade the mind as well as the heart. But yet as it degrades it can also heal. Heal the distance between him and her. Why as he holds this mess of plastic in his hand, Does it have to be her on the other side? Can it not just be someone else? Someone who could just, Heal the degeneration that this mess has done? The stupid plastic pieces that have cut to the bone. The wires being bitten apart in order to destroy the source of torment. The metal screws flying through the madness. And in the end. The battered mess still ringing

Dude.... by Detic, literature

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Dude....

Peace... Finally in this place I can see it all. Feel it all. Understand the real meaning of the word breathe. Feel clean air rushing into my lungs. The trees that keep you centered. Understanding that the new leaves have been turned. Just this once... I understand. Without the soiled air of the towns we live in. Just feeling the cleansing gusts of freshness. Getting lost in my self for only god knows how long. This type of freedom is lost in a hometown. Nothing can touch me up here. This is land untamed by the Industrial Devistation of America. Nothing happens here but I still can not get past that fact that, This is peace.

6 Months Pending... by Detic, literature

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6 Months Pending...

How can he feel so safe when he's lost in you? In your words of comfort and freedom. Promises so open and true. Fearless are your eyes when faced with a challenge. Dull do his glow when faced with defeat. Your tears move the stars whenever you cry The moon could be yours if you ever tried Where did the time go when we were young? So careless and free, always having fun.

This Curse by Detic, literature

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This Curse

Sleep, Why? Eat, What? Work, When? Love, How? How do you love someone when all you've ever known of it was false? False Hope, False happiness, false love. Why must we live in desperation of love? Is it something that pulls us in and keeps us there? Or is it something that you choose to have happen? Looking into photos, do you see the shell that you used to be? Do you hate the memories from the pictures that you have? The ripped, torn, bitten apart pictures that you just can't delete from your computer? Yes, you know what this poems about. It's the poem about your inability to see the ugly truth. That You Are Destined To F

The Question by Detic, literature

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The Question

Is this the reason why? Answer this I think you'll cry Can you feel the tension in the air? Static pleasures flying everywhere Late nights riding home alone In the darkness flying farther Don't you love the way she floats Sliding straight down your throat Ride the airwaves to disaster Sleep the days away to safety Dodge the bullet for the last time Luck runs out all too quickly Call out an SOS Maybe someone'll be there on the other side Living life to the limit Seeing love from other people Fleeing the questions The answers that will make you cry Feeling love from loveless bodies Tasting life, sleeping through death Choki

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To Gape by Detic, literature

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Four letters by Detic, literature

Moving on by Detic, literature

Phone by Detic, literature

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Phone

Dude.... by Detic, literature

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Dude....

6 Months Pending... by Detic, literature

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6 Months Pending...

This Curse by Detic, literature

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This Curse

The Question by Detic, literature

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The Question

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Long Live the Sorrow by myxpoeticxtragedy, literature

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Long Live the Sorrow

You watch as the ink touches paper These troubled eyes call for a desolate ending Relieving the burden of your own little hell A taste of things to come... Your thoughts make for a good laugh You won't live to regret your choice set in stone You've staged a smile for a lifetime too long There's so much they will never know ...Time to put the act to rest. Staring through clouded eyes at the only thing between the peace you never had and your everlasting anguish The once feared enemy, has now become your only hope to escape this wretched tale Entering the unknown, leaving behind the life you never had. Just the ink conformed to the

Hybrid Realities by DarkNalcon, literature

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Hybrid Realities

Days seem so long When I sit here alone fading in and out of thought that is but the memory of yesterday realising that theres no point in living As I'm living a lie but what is a lie for truth is a shadow As i sit trying not to cry those memories continue to torture me And what i see before my eyes slowly... ...fades away... I'm dreaming now But such a horrid dream is this! why? why? ...eruption of thought How can this be truth When the lies are so much better Confused at the sights Confused at the noise My life is not in control I am not myself anymore There's this demon inside me Trying to free me.... ...From... ...

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Artist // Literature

United States
Deviant for 19 years
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Current Residence: Fairfield Conn.
Favourite genre of music: ANYTHING!
Favourite photographer: JLIFIII
Operating System: Windows
MP3 player of choice: Shit for brains
Favourite cartoon character: THUMPER!!!! from bambi

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

Strung Out, Rufio, DragonForce

Favourite Games

FinalFantasy X

Favourite Gaming Platform

My PS2

Tools of the Trade

My Computer and my Pen

Other Interests

Movies, Writing, Tae Kwon Do, My Music

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Detic

Jan 1, 2008

Happy New Year.

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I write this in a new mood of sorts. I realize now that life is ever changing no matter how stationary I want it to be. I also realize that my friends are quite possibly the best thing in my life, and therefore should never be overlooked. And as much as a new year coming is sort of big it's just another year in the span of everyones eventual short lives. I've never really recollected on a year like I feel I am about to, but we will try it and see how long this lasts. First off, my writing failed this year, even if most of the writing I've ever done was this year. I feel as if I didn't put any effort into it. Just whenever I had a break durin

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Detic

Sep 11, 2007

New stoffs

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I should be able to upload some newish things soon, I just need to get a time when I'm not working on a ridiculous art project.

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Detic

Mar 29, 2007

It's a birthday...

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Well I got one entry up. I plan on doing at least two more by April break. At least I hope to. Also, I'm 18 today. Wooofuckinghooooo. Not that big once it happens. The only thing that can happen now is if I ever wanted to start smoking I can. And I can be drafted... What fun^^... I can't even fucking gamble yet... That's something I want.... Well Need to go have fun all of you. Peace

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coldwintersxo

Jun 11, 2007

You wake up in a red room with no windows and doors, DON'T panic.. you're just in my heart!!! Send this to all the friends you want to keep forever...

Today is Bestfriend Day. Send this to all of your friends, and me if I am one. If you get 7 back you are LOVED!!! Here are the numbers of what kind of friend you are based on how many you get back..

1-3 ~ you're a bad friend
4-6 ~ you're an okay friend
7-9 ~ you're a good friend
10+ ~ you're great friend
=]]

JLIFIII

Apr 23, 2007

lol i beet you im on Gueom`s wii btw he told me how to spell it lol

Needs more Llama

Hey thanks for the fav on [link]
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im watching you.

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StarsxMustxDie

Nov 18, 2006

If you've been poked it shows that you are either a very good friend or a very good artist. If you have been poked then you must poke at least five people on DA that you view as a great friend or a great artist as well as the one who poked you. Happy Poking!

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